Interesting.
I don't want to publish spoilers in the public comment section, but I liked what you did at the ending, I think that can bring an uncommon outcome to the story.
I also liked the two rules of the system shown in this chapter, reminded me a little about how a similar system works in Dorehedoro.
Keep posting the previews on Newgrounds, so that people get notified when you publish Chapter 2, I'm already invested in seeing how it will look like.